The Official Writing Challenge
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02/26/23
This is so poetically expressed. I enjoyed it
Your style intrigues me. That first line was a mouthful but it worked for me because it gentled my heart as the picture unfolded. I am not sure 'quieten' is a word. Your point is well taken. We need to sacrifice some of our peace here to better prepare ourselves and others for the eternal version. Keep writing, I look forward to where your unique style will take you.
I stand corrected, I looked up quieten, looks like it has more British roots.