The Official Writing Challenge
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11/10/22
Oh my - I loved this from beginning to end. And your story about the albino effect made me snort my coffee! And I love the help the IANs in the Bible give. I don't care that I know who wrote this, it is lovely.
11/11/22
Fantastic as always!

I was smiling and inspired at once. The name change at the end was beyond priceless.
Great idea!

On a serious note, loved reading about all of the accomplishments you've experienced through Christ.

Overall, a wonderful entry, and beautifully written.

God Bless~
11/12/22
I loved this! Always drawn to multi-cultural experiences. When our first Korean adoptee arrived in our home, a dear saint wondered what language she would speak when she started talking!
I predict a big win for you on this one. If not, I'll offer you double your money back and 2 free trips to Disney World. It wasn't so much about revealing your country that gave away your identity as much as your humor. The "Ians" from the New Testament made me laugh out loud. I would love to hear one of your sermons because you see humor in nearly everything. Don't you think it's time to write another book? Kudos on this great entry
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11/17/22
I was delighted to read your inimitable style once again. It’s been too long. God has given you a wonderful gift of mixing humor with God’s truth. I was fascinated to read about all the ways God has used you. The “Ian’s” made me laugh. Well done and congratulations.
11/17/22
You drew me close, 'knitted' my heart and spirit to every character, the multicultural nature of Moonee Ponds Baptist Church, to you (the Pastor), deeper into your amazing story, and to the Ians. :-) I loved every detail you've skillfully crafted here. Awesome!

Congratulations!