The Official Writing Challenge
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09/02/22
I loved your story. Beautiful imagery. I also felt tension thinking ‘Bobby/Robert?? Same person?? Walking home from the shop while mother was distracted-is there going to be a life time brain injury?
Relief.
Excellent plotting. Kudos.
09/03/22
This is priceless! Anyone who has worked in a nursing home recognizes a stroke victim. The man's mental faculties were fine, but he couldn't express himself. Hence, the depression. I found myself right in the story, partly because I have worked with stroke patients and partly because it's plain good writing! Congratulations on a job well done!