The Official Writing Challenge
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07/22/22
I enjoyed this very much. You brought a freshness and realness to Peter’s story. Two small things: The paragraph beginning “It was exciting stuff” is missing a word in it, I believe. And the paragraph beginning “I thought” is missing several words. But that’s minor and I loved this. I also thought the last two paragraphs were a great ending. The last paragraph made me chuckle. Great job.
07/22/22
I enjoyed this very much. You brought a freshness and realness to Peter’s story. Two small things: The paragraph beginning “It was exciting stuff” is missing a word in it, I believe. And the paragraph beginning “I thought” is missing several words. But that’s minor and I loved this. I also thought the last two paragraphs were a great ending. The last paragraph made me chuckle. Great job.
07/27/22


Excellent entry. Congratulations.