The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/22
I wish I could leap like that. It would truly come in handy, at times. Liked the surprise ending, though. Another superhero has been born!
05/09/22
You really had me deeply invested in Harvey. My heart was broken as I read of the cruelty to Harvey. What a fun surprise ending!
05/09/22
Hubby and I are huge baseball fans, so truly enjoyed your entry based on that alone, and having been to Cooperstown, that made it more meaningful.

However, it was the strong message and the fantastic close that makes this a grand slam for me!

Loved the ending! I'd say you hit this "out of the ballpark!" Wonderful writing and excellent job overall!

God Bless~