The Official Writing Challenge
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Date
03/11/22
Simple truths keep coming here, overlaying each other as your confidence grows. I also like the irregular rhythm that adds its own freshness.
To answer your question -no you can’t say it enough ot too many rhymes. We need to imprint it.
I loved it.
Yes!
I especially love this line:
"Jesus parts
the Red Sea of our unforgiveable past"
Blessings