The Official Writing Challenge
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10/15/21
I loved this. You grabbed me with the first sentence. You really brought Jeremiah to life and ended on a positive note. Just one comment, as a reader I was irritated to have to research who it was who was talking. I thought Jeremiah but needed to double check. This piece could potentially grab the reader’s attention to the book of Jeremiah but not if they don’t know that’s where it is from. We can’t assume the Bible literacy of the reader. Other than that, outstanding job.