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10/14/21
What a great poem. I loved all the examples of faithfulness in the world and how great it is — until it fails. And then to contrast it with God’s neverfailing faithfulness. Perfect use of the theme. Well done.
10/15/21
Beautiful examples of God's faithfulness.
10/15/21
Nice poem. I like how you illustrated the faithfulness that lasts only for a time compared to God's enduring faithfulness.
Whenever all else fails, there's still God. Never changing, never going back on His Word, never subject to the changing winds of culture. We can count on Him to be faithful to the end. Your poem is so well written. I loved the emphasis you put on the last line by using it twice! Good job.
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Well done!