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09/10/21
A lovely retelling of this true story. And what a wonderful, happy ending it had.
09/15/21
You grabbed my attention from the first paragraph with the lovely description contrasting with his loneliness. What a wonderful retelling of your family story. I’m sure it will be especially prized by family members for years. Thank you for sharing this with us.
What a wonderful family story for posterity by this gifted author.
09/16/21
What a beautiful testimonial, Mariane! Thank you for your continued witness and faith.
I enjoyed your well written story and it seems you have a great heritage~~~~
10/08/21
Beautifully written story! I was transported to that period and, oddly enough, even visualized it like an old black and white movie reel! The footnote really made it special. Well done.