The Official Writing Challenge
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08/27/21
I loved the beginning sentence. As someone who loves sparkles I love the idea of sparkly hearts. Just one suggestion, put in some paragraph spaces. A huge block of uninterrupted type is daunting to the reader.

But I loved the special relationship between the grandfather and his granddaughters, the lesson he taught them and the ending sentence. Great use of the topic.
08/28/21
Beautiful and loving message, and wonderful job with the topic.


Blessings~
It is a lovely piece. What a way to imprint kindness. Congratulations
Word from the author--This was a poem in free verse, not requiring paragraphing.