The Official Writing Challenge
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08/20/21
Undisguised clarity all the way through.
08/22/21
A good message. As much as we try we can’t hide fromGod. Praise God that He fills our holes.
I could have written this, though not as eloquently as you did, but because you expressed my feelings as well. Your construction is on target as well as your content. There is nothing we can hide from God but He loves us no matter what. I love the reality of this poem and the hope we have of a forgiving God. Well done!

I KNEW this was a winner! Congratulations on your first-place, well-deserved win! I'm so proud of you!!
08/26/21
Congratulations on a wonderful poem containing needed lessons, and on your most well deserved EC!
08/26/21
Congratulations on your win.
08/27/21
Congratulations on your first place finish, Verna! Heartfelt.
08/28/21
Great rhythm and message. You put a mirror in front of us and refused to pull it away. Congrats on your successful editor's choice award.