The Official Writing Challenge
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So real it brought shivers! The ending did not surprise because of all the foreshadowing. Very well done!
01/28/21
Wow. Very menacing. You captured the malice in their hearts with your descriptions and nicknames. Good job.
01/29/21
Sinister, for sure! Good job.
01/29/21
Written and a from a different perspective, well done. Thank you.