The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a wonderful story. The narrator is delightful . . . and real!
04/16/20
This is great. Really flowed. My critique is maybe leave off the last sentence. I didn't get it. Keep up the writing.
04/17/20
I loved this! You expressed it so well I could see it play out. Well done!
04/21/20
A great story played out within the word limit. Good flow without forcing an early conclusion. Well done. Keep up the good prayers. I have a few places I could direct them toward.
04/23/20
You go girl!! I'm talking about your boldness! The writing is wonderful also, but what thrills me is the power of God being displayed through your boldness. It appears God can make a difference in our neighborhoods if we work together with Him. I have a friend who stood in front of a house that had drug dealing going on in the basement and kindly suggested to every customer that drove up that "I wouldn't go in there if I were you. I think they are dealing drugs." Each customer drove off in a hurry and the next day the basement was empty. God can use boldness!
04/23/20
Congratulations on EC!