The Official Writing Challenge
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02/10/18
Great job with the topic and great writing!
Blessings~
One of many unsung heroes in the medical field...
02/14/18
I had to reread this - my problem, not yours - before I realised that ‘Proud to be a phlebotomist and crazy enough to like it’ was the message on the shirt rather than part of the conversation.
By cleverly characterising the helpful information in the rest of the story, you have given us a handle on it. Had yo not done so, we might still be trying in vein to work it all out.
Well done.