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09/12/15
Powerful descriptions and characterisation, and very credible dialogue that gets right to the issue. A great story that should rate well.
09/13/15
I loved this story, especially Kevin's analogy about adoption and the puppy. You really captured Jessica with all the emotions and fears of a runaway. Your story is also a great reminder to us that God is watching over us and can put the people we need to help us in our path. Great job!
I enjoyed this sweet, heart-warming story.
09/21/15
You did your great title justice.

Your dialogue was authentic and usage of the young girls love for her pup as an example of her adopted parents love brilliant.