The Official Writing Challenge
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05/29/23
I loved this poem and the repetition of breath. Beautifully written with a strong message. Great job. I hope it does well. well.
05/29/23
As I said in another's entry, I know "zilch" about poetry.
I only know my heart, and my heart loved this.

So, your entry is beautiful and powerful.

Great job!

Blessings