The Official Writing Challenge
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10/13/22
This story was raw with emotions and truths. It's so beyond my comprehension to realize these things happen all too often to so many women and children.
I pray constantly for these individuals who can be neighbors and acquaintances along the way.

Blessings~
10/14/22
Good job expressing those twisted rationalities of suffering children. This brought on many old feelings. Well done.
10/15/22
A sad, sad story, but one we should all take notice of. Thank you for sharing!
10/17/22
Raw. Brave. Well written. Hurry back Lord - then all tears will be wiped away.
This story breaks my heart. It is written so well with the underlying story clearly understood. I hope it is fiction.
10/20/22
A well written example of a heartbreaking topic. Excellent job.
Great story. This is real and I like how you captured the "childlike innocence". Well done. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations.
10/20/22
Graham, I was a judge for this topic, and as soon as I read your entry, I emailed Shari to say how impactful it was. Goodness, you had me on the edge of my seat from beginning to end. Well done!
10/20/22
Congrats Graham,
very powerful.
Blessings~
WOW! This is incredibly powerful! And so well written. Congratulations on a VERY well-deserved win!