The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh wow. What a beauty. You had me guessing right until the end. Obviously it’s well written but it is also riveting and precious.
Thank you.
This is such an absorbing story. Congratulations on a well-deserved win.
Congratulations - this was a winner indeed. 💫
What a great story with details bringing the biblical times to life. A great surprise ending that I loved. Congratulations on a well-deserved win.
I loved this piece!! It pulled me in to the circumstances with perfectly balanced descriptions and realistic feelings. Well Done!!
Holly, congratulations on your win for the quarter. It is well-deserved.
Thank you for the thought-provoking story. Your excellent writing pulled me in from the beginning and kept me there.
I'm so happy you were one of the winners. You can be sure this entry will be remembered! Congratulations!

As you described the scenes I felt like I was experiencing the journey and could even picture the camp, the wall and the scroll. When I realized what the parcel was it made me smile and could even sense the excitement.
It also made me think of how many must have taken that same risk of copying and sharing those letters and because they did we can read them today.
This story came alive for me!
Thank you!
Beautiful little short story with an authentic feel and just the right amount of suspense. Let us know when you have the rest of the chapters complete! :)