The Official Writing Challenge
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02/07/20
Oh, I LOVE Mr Chips! Having lived in the middle of nowhere for years I feel your MCs pain in trying to remove a rodent. Fortunately we had a cat who was a great mouse killer.

Fun story, well written.
02/11/20
Cute story!
02/12/20
Well written. I enjoyed this. Reminds me of some of my own experiences with mice and how determined I was to prevent them from getting in. This was a fun piece that left me smiling.
03/13/20
Cute story. Enjoyed reading it.