The Official Writing Challenge
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What an amazing story! Is this non-fiction? Well done.
01/27/20
This was such a heart warming story. Well done.
01/28/20
Loved the story!
01/30/20
Congratulations on your win. Well done! Excellent writing.
02/01/20
leola, congrats on your win. You sure know how to pack a lot of life into a few words. You are a gifted and gracious writer. Well done.
I absolutely love this story, Leola! From the bittersweet beginning to the end, I felt like I got to know "Dad" and the child who missed him so. Congratulations
Leila,

What a touching tribute to your dad. I liked the contrasting viewpoints between his early childhood and adulthood.

Congratulations on your EC Award.
02/02/20
Wow! I love this. I enjoyed getting to know Dad in this heartwarming and well written piece. I can see why this won. Congrats.
04/01/20
Leola, I didn’t see this when you wrote it but I’m so glad I read it today. I just love this! You evoked such feeling for your MC. Right from the beginning it felt like he was familiar. Just gorgeous writing. Period.
04/01/20
Leola, I didn’t see this when you wrote it but I’m so glad I read it today. I just love this! You evoked such feeling for your MC. Right from the beginning it felt like he was familiar. Just gorgeous writing. Period.
04/02/20

Wow, what a fantastic story of your dad's life. You crafted this story in a manner in which I felt as if I was standing in the barn along with your dad.

It appears that your dad was intentional about his faith. Thank you for sharing your heart.
05/08/20
You have such a gift of storytelling. Your dad was an amazing man.