The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a poignant story. It touches the heart and is one almost everyone can relate to. The ending is beyond precious.
I've never heard of the Core Four before-interesting. I had to study your opening line to figure out what you were talking about, then understood. Very creative! I don't know why anyone would bring a basketball to a graveside funeral, however! Your imagery was well done.
I didn't get the first line at all - must not have enough coffee in me yet! However what a great story. Blessings
Congratulations on ranking 17 overall. Happy Dance!