The Official Writing Challenge
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If I ever saw a winner, this is it ! Your imagery is breathtaking and though I've never taken a trip to California, seeing it through your eyes was like magic. Whether free verse or rhyme, you have word carpentry skills that make me green with envy. This is a truly beautiful entry. Big time KUDOS.
Love the descriptive imagery that flows through the whole piece. Great writing.