The Official Writing Challenge
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10/12/18
There's a lot going on here, though your lack of spacing tends to rush us through it with little time to grasp it all.
However your ending did lighten it somewhat.
10/13/18
I enjoyed this. Well done,
Blessings~
10/19/18
This was fun - with a great message. Congratulations on your placing.