The Official Writing Challenge
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07/23/18
I'm reminded of my penny candy days--Lemon Heads, jawbreakers, Charm suckers, Gobstoppers, wax lips, tootsie rolls, licorice whips, Bit o honey, tootsie pops, and Baked Beans. Back then I was a kid in the candy store, now just looking at goodies puts on the pounds.
07/23/18
Great job tracing the conflict of the mc. I found myself rooting for her to stop!