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Really enjoyed the story, interesting to put a face to the warfare we often don't even recognize as such. I did have to read it a second time to get it completely. Great job.
07/21/18
Great job with this creative entry. I enjoyed all the lessons, warnings, and encouragement sprinkled throughout.
I enjoyed your story. It was very imaginative and carried with it a reminder to stay strong in the Lord no matter what tries to come against us.
Congratulations on ranking 12 overall. Happy Dance!
This is really a brilliant piece. It grabbed my attention right from the beginning. I liked that you didn't go with the easy ending. Christian did suffer and fall into a depression, which feels realistic to me. Having his wife pray was an unexpected outcome for me, and I rarely get surprised at endings. Great job and original take on the topic.