The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful story. Cleverly developed. Kept my attention, except it seemed you mixed up Paul and Pete’s name a couple of times and I would go back to reread, seeing if I understood correctly. Nevertheless, a very pleasurable read.
Well done on a heart warming lesson. I really enjoyed this.
This was fun to read, but I don't get why the mother was thanking Paul.
Great job crafting a creative story for the topic. I enjoyed how he was able to be an encouragement to the boy at the end.