The Official Writing Challenge
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06/17/18
Some Sunday school teacher will really appreciate having this story tucked away for just the right moment! Well-done.
06/18/18
Definitely a creative way for the dad to make his point. Great job building up the story.
Little note: you have the character Johnny referring to another classmate Johnny in the story.
06/21/18
This was a fun and creative way to teach an important lesson. Great writing!