The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/18
I enjoyed this read, well done!
Blessings~
05/19/18
Great lesson for all of us! Creative and lesson will stick with me as I needed a reminder.
05/24/18
Been there; felt that. Excellent piece! A well-deserved placement this week. :)
05/24/18
Congratulations on your 2nd place win, Robin.

I've been there and done that.
05/24/18
Had me smiling with the clear soul talk all the way through. Love those peanut M&Ms. Well done on your placement.
05/25/18
congratulations! I enjoyed reading this. I could picture it well.
05/25/18
Congratulations on your 2nd place! I really enjoyed your MC's struggles with forgiveness, and the vending machine. I liked the comparison of the vending machine 'giving up' and the fact that we need to 'give up' on resentment etc. And, I learned a new word: jonesing. (I had to google it to find out its meaning.) Well done!
06/04/18
I love the struggle this guy goes through to forgive. Very fun and imaginative.