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05/10/18
This was a difficult read for me because I lived through what your MC has. Well written story and thanks for sharing.God bless.
05/10/18
My teeth are clenching from the tension. I felt her emotions and fear. Like a scary movie when one wants to shout at the screen...RUN!

This was well done and captivating.
05/11/18
Abuse and all that it entails leaves my stomach in knots, I've a good friend who went through this. It's awful...and no one can understand why they stay. It's not why, it's "because"--of so many reasons. Thankfully many make it out of these relationships, including my friend. Sadly, many do not...

Excellent writing, very authentic and painfully moving.

Blessings~
I really like this and I like the line about how unknown monsters seem scarier than the one you know. Very very good and realistic point of view.
05/17/18
Congrats!
Blessings~
05/17/18
Well done! Very gripping; the tension is palpable. Great job on the italics, too. ;)
05/17/18
Congratulations!