The Official Writing Challenge
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01/20/18
You certainly nailed the topic with this piece.
Blessings~
01/25/18
Jan, that was such a wonderful story! Their predictable relationship fit so well with the topic. I’m so glad the M.C. didn’t go in to the bookstore, though! :) Congratulations on a well-deserved first place!
01/25/18
Congratulations on your 1st place win, Jan.

I'm glad the MC didn't go to the bookstore; I think that would be more cliche than your ending.
01/25/18
A totally believable snapshot of security - even boring security - winning out over fantasy and the thrill of the hunt or being hunted. Well-deserved top-placing.