The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this extended metaphor.
01/13/18
Enjoyed this!
01/16/18
Great lyrical prose - you are a poet for sure! Well done.
01/17/18
I absolutely love it.
Just great Verna - well done and many congratulations. Lovely pictures and rhythm in this poem. Well deserved first place!
Just great Verna - well done and many congratulations. Lovely pictures and rhythm in this poem. Well deserved first place!
01/18/18
Congratulations on your EC and your top ranking. Loved the simple imagery that captures the feeling of an interrupted friendship when you come to the end of a good book. Great work
01/18/18
Congratulations on your 1st place finish, Verna.

I'm glad I got to ride along on your journey. I'm adding this to my favorites. It's been a long time since a poem placed first.
01/19/18
Yay, Verna! 1st place! CONGRATULATIONS!
01/19/18
I LOVED the cleverness of your metaphor! You perfectly and skillfully crafted this poem to describe how a book can transport the reader. I tip my hat to your talent displayed here with the image of climbing aboard a brand new book to sail away and the author at the helm. Congrats, my friend! <3
01/19/18
Congratulations Verna! Your 1st place is well-deserved for this lovely poem.