The Official Writing Challenge
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Date
11/17/17
I found this interesting but my red ink would be to write words and phrases that paint pictures, rather than just telling the reader your story. "Showing" what's going on engages the reader and leaves them wanting more.
Check out the Forums page where you can find a lesson or two on "Showing vs. "Telling"

And do keep on writing.