The Official Writing Challenge
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09/09/17
Great job with the descriptions and nostalgic feel that is prevalent through the peace. I enjoyed reading it and imagining what it would have been like to grow up there.
09/10/17
Well done, I enjoyed your piece and the story for the topic.
Blessings~
09/13/17
Your story brought back memories. I remember the steel skates and the time when kids in the neighborhood gathered to play games.

There was one time when you switched from past to present back to past tense, but it didn't detract from the writing.

Well done.