The Official Writing Challenge
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I really liked the pace of this story. I learned about steam engines. I thoyght the ending was slighrly abrup
Nice writing.
You nailed the topic.

I especially liked the line, "The flames licked their lips like a lion that had never been fed."

You nailed the topic.

I especially liked the line, "The flames licked their lips like a lion that had never been fed."

You nailed the topic.

I especially liked the line, "The flames licked their lips like a lion that had never been fed."

You nailed the topic.

I especially liked the line, "The flames licked their lips like a lion that had never been fed."

You nailed the topic.

I especially liked the line, "The flames licked their lips like a lion that had never been fed."

Sorry. I guess my comments were worth repeating. My phone must have a mind of its own.