The Official Writing Challenge
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07/30/17
Great job with the dream sequence and with showing the grim reality of his situation. The ending made me cringe and chuckle at the same time!
This story has so much--really putting the reader in the horror of wartime with some humor to lighten the mood.
08/09/17
Congratulations on your 4th place win, Ann.

I could see the light and the darkness mixed throughout your piece.