The Official Writing Challenge
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This is masterful. Your pacing was perfect. The story's plodding set the pace and the tempo of the old man. I could feel his pain and frustration. You did a great job of developing the character in such few ways. You held my attention from beginning to end.
07/21/17
Nicely done,
Blessings~