The Official Writing Challenge
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07/13/17
TOTALLY unexpected ending—but so happy that it didn't go as I thought it would! Great suspense!
07/13/17
Surprise! I really like this story, but the ending brought a smile to my face. Thank you!
07/13/17
You totally fooled me with this story. I was ready to believe they were suicide bombers, of course.

I'm so glad they weren't. Well done.
07/14/17
Clever crafting of the story!
07/14/17
Well done,
Blessings~
I love the surprise ending and the way you built up suspense for it.
07/20/17
Congrats!
Blessings~
10/11/17
You aptly spun a story of a terrorist attack that we have all become to familiar with.

The surprise ending was a blessing as my heart was growing heaver by each word I read.