The Official Writing Challenge
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04/20/17
You started out with so much fun, but the end was a real wake-up call. Good characterising and credible dialogue throughout. Well done.
04/21/17
Wow...never expected that ending. Great job with this...I was hoping for a happy outcome. This was a realistic ending.

Great job.
Blessings~
04/27/17
Congratulations on your 4th place win, Francy.

I was so sad that Joe died. I kept on hoping he was just unconscious, but I understand that actions have consequences.