The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/17
I could so relate to "I enjoyed the perspective granted above knees and torsos, gazing outside into the distance." Being 4'10" and standing on a ladder offers a new perspective.
I like the ending. Great things come in small packages, like wonderful human beings.
04/18/17
Your tight writing made for a fast pace read, which I always enjoy. The dialogue between "Bug" and his teacher and, later, his patient drew me in and made me want to meet this little guy. The ending was the perfect way to tie it all together.
04/26/17
Congratulations on your 8th place finish this week in the EC awards, MC.

I was always looking downward because I was a little taller than some of my classmates. I enjoyed the other perspective, though.
05/03/17
I enjoyed your well written inspirational story.