The Official Writing Challenge
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03/11/17
I enjoyed this story. I guessed the identity of the new friend before it was revealed but I wasn't sure. You kept the mystery going well and your MC's behaviour and feelings were very believable.
03/13/17
Great job with the topic.
Blessings~
03/15/17
Great job touching on the various changes and struggles that face a new believer.
Congratulations on ranking 18 overall. Happy Dance!