The Official Writing Challenge
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02/12/17
I enjoy your writing style because it puts me right in the middle of the action instead of as an outsider looking in. You held my attention throughout, however the last sentence felt a little forced to me, and lacking the energy of the rest of the entry. Good read.
02/14/17
The chaos of this story was brought to life. Amazing job!
Well written!