The Official Writing Challenge
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01/12/17
Tender story. I am glad this family could shake the dust from their boots and find hope in the city.
01/13/17
Your writing style in this story gave me insight into your MC- no nonsense- get the job done- survive. It all worked in the telling of this family's journey. I felt their desperation, struggle, & guarded hope of a new beginning.
01/15/17
One word, "excellent!"

God bless~
01/15/17
One word, "excellent!"

God bless~
01/15/17
Very effective, great images,really enjoyed this one
01/19/17
Congratulations for another 1st place EC award, Ann. You have a gift for storytelling and character development.

Congratulations on your win with this delightful story!
01/20/17
Congratulations Ann. You have told and shown so much in this tender short story, and so very well.
01/20/17
Congratulations, Ann, on your well-deserved first place!
Wow! - you outdid yourself. What more can I say!
God bless - Trudy
01/21/17
Congrats! I had a feeling it would do well.
02/19/17
Water of/is life. Congratulations on another superb winning entry.