The Official Writing Challenge
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Usually each of us (me included) have our own things that we are fussy about. The girl was fussy about needing "her jeans" while the mom was fussy about a different style.

This is one area I have to be very careful about judging others choices of being fussy about.

This was written in an entertaining and not to judgmental style. Thank you for you work
Congratulations on your EC award. Well done!
Congratulations, Francie, on your EC for this lively story. Your vivid descriptions and dialog brought your characters to life.
You created a unique piece with a perfect punchline.