The Official Writing Challenge
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11/17/16
"A little child shall lead them..." I doubt if Isaiah had this picture in mind, but I love how you have depicted how technology has fastened itself onto our grandchildren and often left us behind. Great job here.
Such a delightful story. The dialogue was natural and easy going.
The story flowed smoothly and naturally. I loved that Adam was disappointed he couldn't play games and text on the dumbphone.