The Official Writing Challenge
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Veerrrry clever! And heaps of fun. I love how you have woven this 'tail' around such a familiar poem - and how you have so 'harperlee' borrowed from another classic with the name of Mortimer's solicitor.
Great job!
Very funny and very clever. I loved it.
Definitely deserving of first place... creative, humorous, and entertaining. Congratulations!
A very entertaining mousy tale and well deserving of top spot. Congratulations!
So mice to see your creativity recog-miced. Well done. (there's mortimer review than meets the eye, but it will have to wait.)
God bless~
Donna, Congratulations on your EC award.

Your story was clever and fun to read. One of the first things I thought of when the topic was introduced was the line: Not a creature was stirring, not even a mouse. However, I never would have thought of writing the story from the mouse's perspective.

I would like to thank you for being such an encouragement to the other writers in FW.

Donna, Congratulations on your 1st place in EC. Certainly a great take on this week's topic. Enjoyable to read.
Ah the gems I miss when I don't get to the challenge some weeks. Congratulations, Donna, on your quarterly award!
So glad to see that this piece was chosen for the quarter. I added it to my favorites the first time I read it.
Oh how FUN! What unique POV and enjoyable diatribe. Congratulations on your BoB 3rd place! A well-deserved accomplishment.
Congratulations, Donna, on your 3rd Place Best of the Best award! It was fun to revisit this delightful tale.
Congratulations, Donna, on your 3rd place win in the Best of the Year category. It was among my favorites for the year, also.
This was hilarious! What a fantastic letter of complaint. Well done - very clever doing this from the viewpoint of the mouse.
To be honest, it took a moment for me to get into it at first, but as soon as you started mentioning the affect of the poem on the life of the mouse, I was drawn right in. Very creatively done. Congratulations!