The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautifully written piece, which moved me greatly. I thought your message was delivered in such a clever and powerful way. This piece is something special, and I hope it gets the credit it deserves.
I agree with Kat completely. I loved all the symbolism.
Insightful and descriptive portrait of your MC set against the bigger picture of life itself.
Oh my. Beautiful, heart-wrenching, loving scenes and words. Well done.
A beautifully written story. Touching too, right to the heart. You write quite well, and I hope you do well in the ratings.
Very well written. Touched my heart and almost made me cry. Blessings, LaVonne
Congratulations on your EC award, Zach.

I'm so happy to see you found the time to write. You have such a gift of storytelling and engaging the emotions of the reader.
Zach, a beautiful and poignant piece that brought tears to my eyes. You have a talent for storytelling. Your words just seem to pop off the page with realism.