The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautifully written piece, which moved me greatly. I thought your message was delivered in such a clever and powerful way. This piece is something special, and I hope it gets the credit it deserves.
I agree with Kat completely. I loved all the symbolism.
11/13/15
Insightful and descriptive portrait of your MC set against the bigger picture of life itself.
Oh my. Beautiful, heart-wrenching, loving scenes and words. Well done.
11/15/15
A beautifully written story. Touching too, right to the heart. You write quite well, and I hope you do well in the ratings.
11/16/15
Very well written. Touched my heart and almost made me cry. Blessings, LaVonne
11/21/15
Congratulations on your EC award, Zach.

I'm so happy to see you found the time to write. You have such a gift of storytelling and engaging the emotions of the reader.
Zach, a beautiful and poignant piece that brought tears to my eyes. You have a talent for storytelling. Your words just seem to pop off the page with realism.