The Official Writing Challenge
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Wise words! Thank you for sharing this.

God Bless
10/30/15
Only error I noted was in para. 6 where freedoms should not be possessive. I thought you did a great job on this piece. I wish I had been as wise as those parents.
Having a teenager, this story resonates! I loved the way you used dialogue so effectively. Great job!
This would be a good story to submit to a parenting magazine.
I liked the way you added the mix topic at the end. It was a clever use of the topic!
11/02/15
Very clever, and I thought it flowed very well. Great job.
11/05/15
Congratulations on your 5th place EC award, Holly.

I thought you made your point without being preachy. Well written.