The Official Writing Challenge
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08/21/15
Cute, witty, and charming to the finish:) Btw... Is this Noel's entry? If not you (dear author) may find you share a gift with another faithwriter:)

Anyway, bravo and well done;) My favorite this week, for the simple pleasure it brings:)
I enjoyed this. The dialogue was well done. Great job!
08/23/15
A most enjoyable read. Telling it from a child's point of view worked well. I enjoyed your humor such as the 'Jeannie Ollogy' the family are discussing. Well done.
08/24/15
This is a cute story and the dialogue between the boy's is realistic and comical. A fun read for sure. Enjoyed!
08/24/15
Loved the wit in this, loved seeing it from a kid's misunderstandings!
08/29/15
Your delightful dialogue was perfectly believable.

Big smile on this readers face!
09/03/15
Congrats!
God bless~