The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/15
Very enjoyably warm and descriptive; and you captured the setting so economically at the close. And your last line was a clincher.
07/25/15
Clever title. I liked how you wove the theme of wearing bright green shirts throughout the story.
I loved how you portrayed the changes in this family yet throughout had the running theme of green shirts. I also loved how you brought out the uniqueness of each memory yet knitted them together so well. Fantastic piece!
07/30/15
Moving yet lovely story. Congratulations on your EC placing.
Congratulations on your EC! This was one piece I won't forget. Awesome job!
07/30/15
Great writing and congratulations on your EC. Well done.
07/30/15
From your title on, I was entranced with the story, and the photos, and the lighthearted moments, and your perfect ending. This is wonderful. (and after reading the story, I love the title even more) Congrats, Francy.
07/30/15
Congratulations on your 6th place EC award, Francy. Rather than green with envy, I'm in a-green-ment with the judges.
07/31/15
I really loved this piece!
Great job!
God bless~
07/31/15
Oh, and congratulations! LOL

God bless~