The Official Writing Challenge
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06/04/15
I feel the word limit is intruding here, but this is a great intro to a bigger story that could grow out of the truism that people don't care how much we know until they know how much we care. Well done.
06/10/15
Wow! well handled! I like how you interspersed the thoughts with the dialogue. I like how the Christian lived Christ instead of preaching. That's how we can show God's love, by just letting God's Spirit flow through us.
The dialogue in this story seems so real and perceptive in schools today. I liked the way you left the story of the professor still searching for answers. This was a well-written story.